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Friday, 7 June 2019

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White german shepherd are a breed of dog. It is a crossover between a german shepherd with a husky. The white german shepherd looks like a large dog. It is white in colour and is large. It has long legs and a long tail. The while german shepard lives behind the trees in the jungle. People also keep them as pets so they might live at peoples houses. The german shepherd likes to eat meat and dog food. They don’t like to drink milk. They kill sheep,cats and cows. The predators of the white german shepherd are bears, tigers and humans. At 5 years old they are 3X bigger than a puppy and when it is 10 years old they eat more than a 5 year old dog in human years. The white german shepherd are playful and very protective.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora. I am Adrianna from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked how you did your writing about White German Husky’s.
    I learnt that White German Shepherds are really playful.
    Maybe you could insert a picture of a White German Shepherd.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Adrianna

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